Sunday, May 07, 2006

Poetry Challenge......Rendez-vous - for Nooy

Step off the platform
back up against that wall
pull up that collar
and make yourself small
screw up that carnation
say 'hi' to the blues
your lover's not coming
there's no rendez-vous


For Mike de Nooy

6 comments:

Nooy said...

Looks like I'm outta luck!

Thanks, I like it. I reckon British Enlgish really is more catchy to read. Or maybe I just need ot expand my vocabulary ;)
I'll check back tonight see if there is more poetry popping outta you, but now I need to do some studying. I'm rather distracted...
See y'a round!

jta said...

Yeah, this one's really good.

You da bomb, Minx.

Maxine said...

Vivien Leigh, isn't she beautiful? Not one of those "sticks" I am sure.

Minx said...

A lovely, beautiful, talented oldy kind of stick!!
Actually i like to think of myself more of an Audrey Hepburn.

Keris said...

I love this poem! K x

Minx said...

Ooo I love you too Keris, are you home then? I'll call